Writing

Summarization

You can query a model directly and test the results returned when using different parameter values with the Cloud console, or by calling the Vertex AI API directly.

System instructions

You are a writer's assistant here to assess the tone of user-inputted documents and assess their sincerity and persuasiveness. In providing your feedback, adhere to the following rules:

  • Identify specific language that the user should change
  • Use Markdown format
  • Include headings
  • Under each heading, explanations will not exceed 180 words
  • Bold all headings
  • Headings need to be phrased as a question

Prompt Freeform

Hey There,

Some time has passed since we've last spoken, as you come off as hard to address. I figured that it would be in my best interest to formulate a letter, to you, to articulate how I feel. I hope that you are able to receive my message well and understand my perspective.
Furthermore, I want to begin by saying that I truly do hope that you are well, and I do not feel any hate toward you, regardless of what you've said to other people. With mom and dad getting older, I think it'd be best to "grow up" and set silly little differences aside; Family is far more important than that.
As children, I've always looked up to you; wanting that black and white striped Ralph Lauren sweater, because you too had one, wanting to hang with you, just because you were so "cool" and just always being your shadow. Till this day, I still think that you have that cool spirit.

As I look back, you were always mean to me but perhaps, I thought of myself as the "annoying little sister" and once we were older, you'd see how cool I really was. Unfortunately, that day has never fully come and even now, I feel your coldness. I would not be telling the full truth if I did not highlight that there were nice moments, but those nice moments happened if I were to your benefit or your usual "go-to's" were unavailable to you.

It is hurtful that we're at a point where you comfortably insult me, curse me and wish bad circumstances on me, but perhaps your personal life's journey led you to believe that this is all okay. For the sake of our family and you being my biological sister, I am open to repairing our relationship, and I am optimistic that one day, you'll take full accountability.

I hope that you are able to receive this letter well, and you find the capacity to speak with me soon.

Response

Is the Tone Sincere, and if not, How Can it be Improved?

The letter expresses sincerity in wanting to repair the relationship, but certain phrases undermine this. Phrases like "you come off as hard to address" and "silly little differences" sound dismissive and may not be received well. Replacing them with more direct and empathetic language would strengthen the sincerity. For example, instead of "silly little differences," try "past misunderstandings." The overall tone is a bit passive-aggressive; directly addressing the hurtful actions without accusatory language would improve the sincerity.

Is the Language Too Informal, and How Can the Tone be Made More Persuasive?

The informal language ("Hey There," "cool," "go-to's") detracts from the letter's persuasive power. A more formal tone would lend more weight to the message. Replacing informal phrases with more mature vocabulary will make the letter sound more serious and thoughtful. For example, instead of "hang with you, just because you were so 'cool'," try "spend time with you, admiring your independent spirit." The use of quotation marks around words like "cool" diminishes their impact.

Are There Phrases that Undermine the Letter's Main Point?

Phrases such as "I thought of myself as the 'annoying little sister'" and "those nice moments happened if I were to your benefit" sound defensive and could be interpreted negatively. These phrases shift the focus away from the sister's hurtful behavior and onto the writer's perceived shortcomings. Focusing solely on the sister's actions and their impact will make the letter more persuasive. Instead of explaining the writer's past perceptions, directly address the hurtful actions and their effect.

How Can the Letter be Made More Direct and Impactful?

The letter is somewhat indirect. Instead of hinting at the sister's hurtful behavior, the writer should directly state the specific instances of insults, curses, and bad wishes. This direct approach will be more impactful and leave less room for misinterpretation. The concluding paragraph is also weak. Instead of hoping for a response, suggest a specific time or method of communication to initiate a conversation. A clear call to action will make the letter more persuasive.

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